I question perhaps extra space.

Well, you can keep it. Keep the silence? Keep the silence silent? Keep my (as in

“your”
voice? A little unclear on the desire here....

(I like the ambiguity,
but I
thought I’d
point it out)


let it blow unfettered like love letters I like the the, love letters, this

is sort

born of a hand and typewriter— of an unfettered love

For a little archaic
snags maybe ‘drags’? still keeps with
the unfettering?
lull or empty? I like it though...

the ‘letter’ part will be cut, but stays for the sake of I,

not sure about it, mostly because of